22:19 How can Juana best revise the text to help draw in new
clients?
Juana is building a new website for her event-planning
business and wants to include some persuasive text that
helps her draw in new clients. Read Juana's draft.
Everyone likes a party, but planning one is hard work! Why
not leave the hard work to us? Picture Perfect Parties has
experience planning events of all sizes and can help you
make your dream event a reality. Sit back and leave it all to
us. We can plan and manage your event from start to
finish. We also offer partial planning and day-of
coordination for large events. Our clever and crafty touches
will make your party picture perfect!
by stating her main idea at the beginning of the
paragraph
by making unsupported claims about her competitors
by offering a special discount to first-time customers
by choosing information that is more appropriate to the
topic

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)

i suggest it is anadiplosis

the illustration   that would give a reader a clear understanding of the text is a picture of men constructing the frame of a building.the frame is made of iron bars. the text describes the job of blacksmiths'. these were very organised and they had different names: "the driver" and "the heater". the text describes the way in which these men worked ; they worked iron pieces as if they were playing a sport. in fact, the text wants to show the men's skills. the text also puts some emphasis on the use of '' rivets'' in construction. this kind of nails were not always used in the construction of manhattan.

some examples:

"and with an underhand toss he hurled the smoking rivet straight at the catcher, who caught it in mid-air in his catching can." men's skills

"when the driver was ready for a new " the emphasis on the rivet ( special nail used in construction).

" it against a beam to remove any cinders, and jammed it into the waiting hole. " the emphasis on the rivet.

the whisper is the answer, hope this : )