Could someone help restate my thesis statement? Here it is: Animals should not be in cages because of isolation from the real world, pressure, and high mortality rates.

People debate whether it is cruel for animals be in cages or not. It is terrifying that people keep animals in cages.  It is inhumane to keep animals in cages because it is terrible for them to be kept in small isolated areas, such as cages. To situate animals in cages is also affects them socially, making them less friendly and trusting. It is cruel to animals because taking too many animals from their natural habitat and keeping them in captivity is not only bad for that particular animal, but it also affects the environment and can cause terrible species changes and even extinctions.

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1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)

why does the crew join ahab's quest without hesitation?