Elise needs to revise her essay’s conclusion to use a more formal tone. Hera is a Greek goddess you should get to know. I like her because she’s strong, smart, and beautiful. Which revision of Elise's conclusion best uses a formal tone? (A) Hera isn’t just an ordinary Greek goddess. She’s powerful because she’s beautiful, smart, and really strong. (B) Readers should become familiar with the Greek goddess, Hera. Her strength, wisdom, and beauty set her apart from other Olympians. (C) I think Hera is the greatest of the Greek goddesses. She’s not just beautiful, she’s also smart and strong. (D) Everyone who reads about Hera knows that she is a beauty. She also has strength and wisdom to boot!

The answer is B.

Explanation:

It has the most formal tone and the best flow out of the options.Hope this helps!

a compare and contrast essay is a piece of formal writing in which the author focus on the similarities between two ideas, objects, places, etc., and the differences between them. there are some aspects that the author should take into account when he/she is crafting the essay. first, the author has a clear idea of the effect that he/she wants to produce on the audience (a purpose). his/her main idea should be presented in the thesis statement in a simple but effective way which gives the audience a clear idea of the content and the direction of the essay. in addition, it is also important to focus to the similarities and differences that not only are interesting and relevant to the reader but also provide a new, impressive point of view or deeper understanding of a topic.

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