Read this excerpt from a speech meant for the general public: Welcome to this evening's performance of the The Tale

Missy May. I would like to applaud these students for the

hard work they put in to make the play one of the best in

the annals of this institution.

Which revision will make the speech more appropriate for an audience of

elementary students?

See explanation below

Explanation:

When you are giving a speech, you should take into account the audience that it is intended for.

In this case your audience is formed by elementary school students, so it is important to use basic vocabulary that it's easy to understand (remember that they are as young as 6 years old and they might not know the meaning of more sophisticated words)

This excerpt could be adapted to this audience by changing the word "annals" which is a word they might not know the meaning of to another one that is more appropriate for this age and easier to understand. Also, you could change the word "applaud" to "thank" (for the same reasons)

As a side note, you can also add a "Hello" at the beginning to make it sound more friendly.

This is how it would be:

Hello!

Welcome to this evening's performance of The Tale Missy May. I would like to thank these students for the hard work they put in to make this play one of the best in the history of this school!

israel is a small country in the middle east about the size of the state of new jersey. the country has a diverse climate with snowy mountains in the north and the hot desert in the south. jordan, syria, and the palestinian authority all border israel to the east. lebanon serves as the northern border and egypt borders in the south.about two-thirds of the population was born in israel. all other israelis come from over 100 different countries. most israeli jews live a lifestyle similar to western europeans and north americans.israel's population is about 75 percent jewish; most of the rest is arab. the israeli-occupied palestinian territories have some 3.5 million inhabitants—about 11 percent jewish, 89 percent palestinian.because of israel's variety of terrain and climate, the country has a large variety of animals. boars roam the damp oak woodlands of the golan heights. caspian turtles live in the marshlands along the coast. and hyenas are prevalent in the negev desert region in the southern israel.israel is the only fully democratic country in the middle east. elections are held for seats in the knesset or parliament every four years. if a party wins 2 percent of the votes, the party gets one or more seats in parliament. no one party has control so they have to work together. the leader of the largest party becomes prime minister.the story of modern israel begins more than 3,500 years ago. most israelis are jews, who are said to be descended from the biblical figure abraham, through his son isaac.

(hope this and mark me as brainliest)