How does a dialogue influence point of view? Dialogue and point of view are not connected.
Dialogue in a story means the first-person point of view.
Dialogue can show examples of point of view.
Dialogue in a story means a third-person omniscient point of view.

It's about a overweight ogre and another female ogre. there is also a donkey and cat in boots for some reason.

What u have here is a dangling do not have a subject that goes with ur verb. you do not have a " doer " for the actionhaving read the children a bedtime story, the house was shut down for the night.  so who read the children the story ? it wasn't the house. so we have to add a doer of the action to revise this sentence.having read the children a bedtime story, jill shut the house down for the night. < == this is the revised sentence.