Im bad at writing poems is this a good poem? should I add to it in any way or change it?

life is like an hourglass.
Slowly going down the vast
Like playing in the sand
Or walking through the grass

Life goes by so fast
Falling like sand
Try to stop it with your hand
It will eventually overflow
And drop into the below

Often like a desert
The ahead in life is utterly unknown
Just like the sandy biomes weather
Nice and warm in the sunny zone
Or cold and frightening in the night lone

Yes it is good but you can fix the last stanza by fixing some word other than that its a good poem

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I think its good but like the other person said just fix the stanzas

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explanation:

you only need simple sentences to answer this. just answer these questions.

what do you think annie thinks of the mother? do you think annie believes the mother is a fit mother for helen.

what about the father? what would annie think of him? she might not like him, but does she respect him.

how about the son? would annie think he is the only voice of sanity in an insane place?

what about helen herself? this is the key question. how does she see helen? what do you suppose she thought her first job was going to be.

these aren't hard questions. just state the obvious. annie is not that well educated: she just knows what she has to do. write it that way.

you can do it if you've read the book or seen the play or movie.