1. Prepare a second opening argument.

2. Navigate back to the evidence chart and find a piece of evidence that you didn’t use in the opening argument you wrote in class.

3. Use this second piece of evidence to write another opening argument about why the narrator should be judged sane or insane.

4. You may begin your argument with the following statement or write your own:
It is absolutely clear that the defendant was sane/insane when he committed this crime. The evidence I am about to describe will prove this beyond a doubt.

Read the rough draft of a student's conclusion to anargumentative editorial.(1) year-round schooling would student achievement.(2) not so much information would have to be crammed intonine months. (3) furthermore, the elimination of long breaks,particularly summer break, would significantly reduce"learning loss" and the additional time wasted at thebeginning of each academic year to reteach previouslylearned material. (4) it is clear that year-round schooling students learn and retain more. (5) the united staleis not the only country to experiment with a year-roundschool schedule. (6) although many still claim that evidenceabout year-round school and its link to higher achievement isinconclusive, these people need to open their eyes and seethat students in these schools consistently score higher oncertain assessments than students who attend schools withtraditional nine-month calendars. (7) it is about time that wereplaced our outdated and inefficient school calendars.which best revises sentence 6 to create a more appropriate and respectful tone