Which is the best example of a vivid sensory detail?

The word 'sensory' refers to the five senses: sight, touch, taste, smell, sound. Vivid sensory detail uses words that are extremely descriptive.

Explanation:

People use these to explain with sight and touch, we can use these allot. we even use them daily, we don't even know it.

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.  

may i ask what topic?