Read this student's rough draft.
I learned the game of chess under the wise tutelage of my
Uncle Ray. He's a chess master, and he dominates the
West Side Park tournaments each spring. Uncle Ray
explained bishops, rooks, and pawns for me as my parents
were teaching me my alphabet. I learned how to protect my
queen as my peers learned to ride bicycles, Ray instructed
me daily on chess theory and end game strategy
Which concluding sentence best reflects the writer's voice?
He taught me about chess legend Garry Kasparov, and
together we dissected his games
I like chess because it's super fun, and someday I'll beat
my uncle at his own game.
He is a fantastic teacher, and he has the skills to crush
the competition in any tourney
The next local toumament is being sponsored by the
Rotary club, and the entry fee is ten dollars.