What is the best way to revise this sentence?

Greg’s feelings about his dad changed after Lemon Brown talks to him.
Greg sees his father in a new light after Lemon Brown speaks to him.
Greg appreciates his father more after his conversation with Lemon Brown.
Greg’s respect for his dad grew after he has spoken with Lemon Brown.

This is what i found “an elliptical clause is a type of dependent, or subordinate, clause that is missing a word or words. often, the missing part is a verb or verb phrase. while elliptical clauses are acceptable to use, they can sometimes cause confusion for writers and readers, especially when the sentence ends with a pronoun.” i hope this you for what your looking for. can you plz mark me brainliest?

Then what do i do after i read the excerpt? i’m not really understanding the question here.