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English, 06.05.2020 19:14 StupidityIsKey
Re-Write Please And Don't Use A ery High Vocabulary ( I'm An Idiot )
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Focus: the focus in the first passage is about how he came to be in time everything he went through stating his full name birth date and birthplace also the dates of everything that had happened in his life
Amount of detail: the amount of detail is of an outsider looking in only stating what was already been said and detail was more dry than and auto-bio would have been because the person writing about it wasn't the person who experienced these things and didn't hear the exact words that were said at certain moments
use of language: this type of language sounds more like their trying to tell you do not show you what happened so you can't really imagen what happened at those certain events unless you did your own deep research
tone: this tone was rather professional and informative than anything like i said before They were telling you rather than showing you what happened
Message: the message was how successful Ben was in all the events that occurred
Story 2
Focus: the focus was more on his life and how he felt and how he felt time was passing
Amount of detail: the amount of detail helped you imagine more of everything the amount of detail was very good here and helped you see what was going on less dry than the Bio
Use of language: At this aspect you can see that he took time to write his life out with consideration and his use of language here was very smooth and flowed very nicely together
Tone: his tone was more relaxed as he was trying to inform you as much as possible telling you his hopes and dreams growing up the things people said to him and turning points
Message: the message here was clear and inspiring he tells you how much better his imagination and life has gotten better all because he read and read he even got smarter and became a product of inspiration himself like he had hoped all his life
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English, 21.06.2019 21:30
Pls needs hypehen or no hyphen 1. after serving as principal for ten years,mr. jones will resign this year 2. it's sixty seven degrees outside and it's only february!
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English, 21.06.2019 23:10
Awell-written summary should be used o in place of reading an original text to you review something that you have already read
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English, 22.06.2019 00:10
Discuss how social status may align with historical criticism.
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English, 22.06.2019 02:20
100 points and ! plz answer ! think of an intense argument you had or witnessed sometime in your life. close your eyes and remember every detail. to turn this into a dramatic scene you will need to make changes that will make it make more sense to the audience. 500-600 words a description of the set up that explains what happened before the scene diction that matches the characters character objectives and obstacles are clearly conveyed a scene that escalates in dramatic intensity diction that is appropriate to the audience words that are not wasted in idle chit chat action (stage directions) that enhance the scene proper formatting for drama
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Re-Write Please And Don't Use A ery High Vocabulary ( I'm An Idiot )
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