I started writing a sonnet. I NEED HELP!!

“Nothing on my mind
Empty big head
I do this all the time
Now, I’m ready to go to bed. “

It’s not the bestt so help. QUICK PLEASE?

I like the sonnet so far. I think you can add a line by saying "am i only worth a dime...how could i be so blind". I hope this helps you!!!

Nothing on my mind

a completely empty head

My thoughts are always blind

until i go to bed

All I can do is sleep tonight

what will my dreams reveal

maybe i will take flight

the view would be so surreal

I could fly to other place

so far away from here

so many new adventures to face

I'll do so with no fear

I guess I have to wait and see

for where the night may take me

Explanation:

I made your original better so forget the old one. Now its a fourteen line sonnet :)

there purpose is to entertain