Circle the conjunctions. In the blank write coord. if the conjunction is coordinating.
Write corr. if the conjunction is correlative. Write sub. if the conjunction is subordinate.
sub. We will leave for vacation as soon as the tickets arrive.
sub. 1. While many people have watched a marathon race, few have ever competed in one.
coord. 2. It’s Friday night, and I have to stay home to clean my room.
corr. 3. Neither Sasha nor her brother could locate the car.
coord. 4. We will visit Washington, D. C., or Williamsburg, Virginia, in June.
sub. 5. Although I prefer apples, I also like strawberries.
corr. 6. Both Jason and Eric made the basketball team.
sub. 7. Whenever the parents leave for work, the children throw a temper tantrum.
sub. 8. The fans were quiet until the golfer putted.

use the headings to create an overview of the main points.

the conclusion would be the most affected category scoring

and your question what topic are you in trouble with?

to eliminate ambiguous remote or broad reference it is necessary to focus on anaphoric reference. by definition "anaphoric reference means that a word in a text refers back to other ideas in the text for its meaning." the references should be clear and leave no room for ambiguity.

in the first case the pronoun it probably refers to the car but it has not been mentioned before so we should replace it for the car. in doing so the statement becomes clear.

in sentence number   two   the pronoun he refers to charles dickens the author. yet, the first half of the sentence is about the book a tale of two cities. to repair this it would be better to rephrase the first half : after i read   a tale of two cities by dickens, he so as to remove the remote reference.