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Write your Basic Thesis Statement in the space below.
Marther Lurther King Jr. uses metaphors and analogies in his letter to appeal to the spectators from an emotional point of view and persuade his audience to join his anti racist movement.

Go through the Thesis Statement Essentials Checklist. It is okay if you are not able to check off some of these characteristics.

Is your thesis statement one sentence? YES
Does it answer the question? YES
Does it use specific words? YES
Does it take a stand? Could someone have a different interpretation? NO
Does it answer “Why does this matter?” or “So what?” YES
Based on the checklist above, revise your thesis statement so that it has all of the above qualities and include it here.

Marther Lurther King, Jr. uses metaphors and analogies in his letter to appeal to the spectators from an emotional point of view, and to persuade his audience to join his movement against segregation.

Just a couple of grammar fixes.

the answer is most likely c. it shows us that the rules that the pigs make can change on a whim whenever it suits the pigs purpose.

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i decided to stay late in the laboratory to continue my experiment with the lightbulb. at midnight, thomas edison opened the door and saw all the stuff he was working on. the lightbulb, film and the transmitter. as he walks in an idea hits him on how the lightbulb would work. he would have to change a few wires around to get it to light up. when he did change the wires around it worked so he decided to write a telegraph to his friend to tell him about his success.   as he was packing up he grabbed the telegraph and walked to his home. he told his wife about the success and the next morning mailed the telegraph.