Only a very small handfull of students in the third grade own a cell phone that they actually bring to school. Some people beleive that third grade is too young to own a cell phone, but I dissagree. As long as the student keeps the cell phone on silent or off during the school day, cell phones should not be a problem for teachers. In our time, even third graders need phones to call they're parents to come pick them up early if an after-school activitiy is cancelled. They also can help a parent and child both feel saffer about keeping in constant communication. Cell phones keep getting cheaper, and parents can put all sorts of parental limmits on cell phones if they want to. I believe that cell phones are hear to stay. If you were editing this paragraph using a rubric, in which area would this paragraph need the most improvement? A) misspelled words B) grammatical errors C) incorrect punctuation D) poor sentence structure

A

Explanation: because there are multiple misspelled words in the question

B) grammatical errors

Explanation:

it has many spelling errors, misused words, and not needed words (not A because it has more then just misspelled word)

- handfull- handful

- take out actually

- beleive- believe

- dissagree- disagree

- they're- their

- come- come to (needed a participle)

- activitiy- activity

- cancelled- canceled

-saffer- safer

-limmits- limits

-hear-  here

in other words

to put it differently

for one thing

as an illustration

in this case

for this reason

to put it another way

that is to say

with attention to

by all means

important to realize

another key point

first thing to remember

most compelling evidence

must be remembered

point often overlooked

to point out

on the positive side

on the negative side

with this in mind

notably

including

like

to be sure

namely

chiefly

truly

indeed

certainly

surely

markedly

such as

especially

explicitly

specifically

expressly

surprisingly

frequently

significantly

particularly

in fact

in general

in particular

in detail

for example

for instance

to demonstrate

to emphasize

to repeat

to clarify

to explain

to enumerate