Bianka walked onto the stage to play in the piano recital.

Which revision should the writer make to emphasize how Bianka was feeling?

A) Bianka nervously walked onto the stage to play in her first piano recital.
B) When it was her turn, Bianka walked onto the stage to play in her first piano recital.
C) Bianka walked onto the auditorium stage to play in the piano recital.
D) Bianka walked onto the stage to play in the piano recital for the first time.

Your answer would be A

The reason it would be A is because the rest of the answers tell what she did and there was no emotion in Bianca's addutitue.

Nervous is an adj. and it tells you how she is feeling.

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