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How can Sharil best adjust her argument based on this new
information, while still keeping her claim the same?
Sharil wrote an argument in favor of starting a rock-climbing
club at her school as a fun and safe activity. She then came
across a source claiming that rock climbers have an
increased risk of developing wrist and ankle injuries because
rock climbing places pressure on the joints, which can
cause sprains.

by going back through her original essay and removing
every direct reference to rock climbing or rock walls

by not referring to this new information in her argument
and instead focusing on what she has already learned

by arguing that the increased risk of wrist and ankle
injuries should be ignored since it is not a serious problem

by recognizing the risks but arguing that students can
avoid injuries if they are careful and use the right
equipment
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Read the rough-draft paragraph. exercising daily is one of the best ways to the body fight fatigue, illness, stress, and weight gain. whether taking a bike ride, enjoying a walk, or going for a swim, the type of activity is not as important as exercising consistently. often, people begin the new year with the resolution of exercising, but within a few months that commitment is quickly forgotten. the key is to choose something that is accessible, enjoyable, and affordable. exercising just thirty minutes a day not only strengthens the heart and lungs, but it also to boost one’s energy. another way to feel more energized is to eat a balanced diet. since no single food item can supply the body with everything it needs, it is important to eat a variety of foods. so to maintain a long, happy life, get out there and get moving, and enjoy a wide range of healthy meals. which statement best describes the mistake the writer makes in this paragraph?

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