Nari should revise her writing to remove
Read the paragraph Nari wrote after researching weather.
Warm temperatures and sunshine are the most enjoyable
types of weather. This can be seen by the vacation spots
chosen each year. More people choose tropical locations
than any other type of place. Celebrities always show
pictures of themselves in sunny locations in summer
clothing. It has never been popular to vacation in cold
climates.

negative words.
repeated claims.
false information.
bandwagon appeals.