Fill out the following statements below to create your description. Finish each sentence in a way that is true to your character. I ALREADY FILLED OUT THE STATEMENTS BUT I NEED HELP ON THE ESSAY.
My Character’s Name: Captain Nemo
I am… (Captain Nemo)
I wonder… about the under world
I hear… the dolphin sounds
I see… the splashing fish
I want… to be with them
I say… that I don’t but I do
I pretend… not to feel this way
I feel… like I should be in the sea
I touch… water and it calls to me
I worry… what people will think
I cry… salty tears
I understand/don’t understand… (choose one) I understand I sound insane but the water calls me
I dream… of being in a world unlike my own
I hope… someday I could go there
I am… ( Captain Nemo)

Part Two: Short Analytical Response
In a short paragraph (200-300 words), you will explain how these statements accurately describe the character. Use specific examples from the novel to defend your statements above. Do not just state facts about your character. Focus on the statements you made in your description and prove that they are true by discussing scenes in the novel. Remember, since you are using specific examples from the novel, you must include parenthetical citations for any quotes or anytime you paraphrase a scene, and you must include a work cited entry. (Note that no more than 10% of your paragraph should be quoted material.) Your work cited entry must be for the novel only. No other outside sources may be used. 90 POINTS!!

- "a nonrestrictive clause functions as a modifier to a noun (that is an object, person or concept). these clauses can be described by the following three options: it is set off by comas, it contains a subject and a verbs and it adds nonessential information to the sentence.

for example, in "here is bill gates, who confounded microsoft software company" we can identify "who confounded microsoft software company" as a nonrestrictive clause modifying the noun bill gates. this clause can be describes as a nonrestrictive clause because it is separated by a comma, it adds nonessential information to identify who bill gates is and it must contain both a subject (who) and a verb (confounded)."

the illustration   that would give a reader a clear understanding of the text is a picture of men constructing the frame of a building.the frame is made of iron bars. the text describes the job of blacksmiths'. these were very organised and they had different names: "the driver" and "the heater". the text describes the way in which these men worked ; they worked iron pieces as if they were playing a sport. in fact, the text wants to show the men's skills. the text also puts some emphasis on the use of '' rivets'' in construction. this kind of nails were not always used in the construction of manhattan.

some examples:

"and with an underhand toss he hurled the smoking rivet straight at the catcher, who caught it in mid-air in his catching can." men's skills

"when the driver was ready for a new " the emphasis on the rivet ( special nail used in construction).

" it against a beam to remove any cinders, and jammed it into the waiting hole. " the emphasis on the rivet.

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