How do you write a good introduction paragraph

Hook, ellaboration, and thesis.

Explanation

The first part of the paragraph should draw people in, so a hook would be beneficial. Depending on the topic, it could be in the form of a question or just an interesting statement.

The thesis should be at the end of the paragraph. You need to state what your paper will be about.

The ellaboration is the connecter. How do you get from your hook to your thesis? It is like the train tracks from one station to another. Your readers are the train. They need to be able to get from one idea to the other safely.

make no change because everything else is correct

first one is your answer

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