Read these sentences from a student's draft.
Which revision is the best example of adding concrete
details?
Abc
The firefighters went to the wrong place. It took them too
long.
O The firefighters responded when "shouts of 'Fire!'
were heard" (Murphy 33). They were quick to arrive
but had already wasted time.
Tired and unsteady, the firefighters were not
prepared for the job. It took a while.
O A signal mistake cost time because "dozens of
firefighters were sent on a wild-goose chase"
(Murphy 33).

hey were quick to arrive

but had already wasted time.

Tired and unsteady, the firefighters were not

prepared for the job. It took a while.

O A signal mistake cost time because "dozens of

firefighters were sent on a wild-goose chase"

(Murphy 33).

Explanation:

A signal mistake cost time because "dozens of firefighters were sent on a wild-goose chase" (murphy 33).

Explanation: The answer is C.

the correct answer would be:  

a. adverb phrase

i think the answer is :   the assassination of julius caesar causes the death of numerous roman citizens, the formation of new conflicts, and mark antony rises in power, also b

hope i

-lavira : )