(1) Hard work is also important because it can help you get your dream job. (2) For example, my sister always loved to travel and work with children. (3) Her dream job was to teach English in Korea. (4) She had to make many good impressions on certain people. (5) She took Korean classes and even volunteered for a tutoring program so she could practice working with young children. (6) My sister got one of the few available jobs because of her hard work.

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paine is arguying that they had tried everything before coming to the conclusion that they needed to fight for their freedom.

argument: "every quiet method for peace hath been ineffectual."

claim 1: "our prayers have been rejected with disdain; and only tended to convince us, that nothing flatters vanity, or confirms obstinacy in kings more than repeated petitioning and nothing hath contributed more than that very measure to make the kings of europe absolute."

claim 2: "wherefore, since nothing but blows will do, for god’s sake, let us come to a final separation, and not leave the next generation to be cutting throats, under the violated unmeaning names of parent and child."