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4 bodies and 1 survivor by Makayla B
Prologue
Logan, Chase, Micah, and Jacob were in the woods one night. While they were walking Logan noticed a pile of leaves in a huge pile he said “guys come look at this huge pile of leave” so everyone came over and was poking it with a stick when Micah said “Oh my gosh you guys we need to leave now. Look there are 4 dead bodies that look like they had just been killed. Who knows the killer might still be here looking for more people to kill” . They ran out of the woods and when they were out of the woods they bumped into Tyler.
Tyler saw the boys running out of the woods and he asked “what’s wrong guys?”. Jacob said “We were in the woods just minding our own business when Logan found a huge pile of leaves and we started poking the leaf pile with a stick and we discovered 4 dead bodies we didn’t know what to do because we had no idea if the killer was still out there. The dead bodies were just killed.” The boys are still shaking and are still out of breath from running out of the woods that they didn’t even notice that Tyler had blood on his hands and a knife in his back pocket.