Use page numbers and quotations to write a three- to five-sentence paragraph about one theme from your novel or short story. Remember to include the title and author or the novel or short story. the outsiders

cinderrella becuase she is an old character and well famous

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.  

theresa is going to be my girl this year, he promised himself as he left the gym full of students in his new fall clothes.