4. Judy asked Sarah to help her edit the following paragraph. Identify the correct example of
editing
Tony and Mark decided to open a coffe shop on the corner of elm Street and 8th Avenue. Much
to their shock, in the first week Tony and Mark have made no sales and begin to worry if their
business endeavor was a smart one With $10,000 dollars from the bank the two men purchase
all the supplies needed to begin their first week.. After a little advertisng and free samples, the
shop is doing much better.
O Sarah corrects the spelling of the word advertising in the last sentence.
Sarah informs Judy that the essay is not organized properly.
Sarah suggests to Judy that she have a solid thesis statement.
Sarah suggests to Judy that the paragraph should be coherent.

In this unit ,we learned about arguments and rhetoric.in an argument we ,not informal language.

3. what differences do you see in the statistics between the two cities? what factors might account for the differences you see?

Read the excerpt from "annabel lee," by edgar allan poe. and this was the reason that, long ago, in this kingdom by the sea, a wind blew out of a cloud, chilling my beautiful annabel lee; so that her highborn kinsmen came and bore her away from me, to shut her up in a sepulchre in this kingdom by the sea. how does the rhythm of the excerpt support the theme of the poem? the rhythm changes on the phrase “a kingdom by the sea,” emphasizing poe’s distrust of a monarchy. the rhythm changes on the phrase “bore her away from me,” emphasizing poe’s desire to be reunited the rhythm changes on the words “chilling” and “sepulchre,” emphasizing poe’s complaint about unexpected death. the rhythm changes on the words “lee” and “me,” emphasizing poe’s fear that his bond with his love is fragile.