2. write the thesis statement for your argument using the combined counterclaim / claim pattern you learned.

hook; getting paid to play is a benefit college athletes should receive!

sources; let's start paying college athletes / worth of athletic scholarship can go beyond degree

examples;
while many teens might view traveling and volunteering abroad as a worthwhile adventure, there are more genuine and effective ways to make a difference.

some believe that teens can and should blend traveling with volunteering; however, evidence suggests that there are more genuine and effective ways to make a difference.