Hey i need writing a argumentative essay about how 13 is too young to have social media

Explanation:

Social media has both, good and bad sides. It can be useful and it can be very harmful because of the various content that is posting on them. People can post almost everything that they want to and it can affect young people's emotions and behavior.

For example, if the children are seeing often harmful things such as fights and war, it can affect his behavior and a kid can act aggresively. It is also not good because those children can experience bullying through social media and it can reflect on them so they can start doing that too.

Also, on social media there are a lot of photos that are edited do the children in that age can feel less confident about themselves.

bildungsroman is a german word for novel covering youth to adulthood which describes a coming-of-age story

3 is blunder, i’m not sure about the last one but the first two look correct