Which would most improve the coherence of an essay?
a) adding vivid sensory details and active verbs
b) revising the essay to past tense to link ideas
c) using active voice and first person point of view
d) considering the essay's organization and repeating keywords

What does the simile add to the passage

Which of the following root words means bad

Can you correct this paragraph? a football player once had a dream. the dream was about the queen of england. she was on a boat and was fishing. when she tried to put a worm on the fishing hook, her necklace fell into the water. a train conductor named maxwell threw popcorn in the water. the fish ate the popcorn then gave the queen her necklace. the queen said, ” you all for me get my necklace back! ” “you are welcome said the conductor and all the fish.