Read the sentence from a student's essay about "the treasure of lemon brown."

greg has changed the way that he thinks about his father after he has spoken to lemon brown.

what is the best way to revise this sentence?

greg's feelings about his dad changed after lemon brown talks to him.

greg sees his father in a new light after lemon brown speaks to him.

greg appreciates his father more after his conversation with lemon brown.

greg's respect for his dad grew after he has spoken with lemon brown.

brutus overlooks that the majority of the crowd served julius caesar the military general. he appeals to their citizenship as romans by calling them first by that name in his salutation: "romans, countrymen, lovers." mark antony, however, speaks in terms understood by the military, by calling them first by, "friends, romans, countrymen." he recalls not only caesar the general but caesar the friend, whose body they see covered with stab wounds.

the mending wall was written by robert frost

"the tune the he might never know again." this part build anticipation. dexter got extremely happy by the piano tune. he could see what he was living at that moment in his life throught this feeling. the reader might want to learn more about his happy life. in fact, he called it a state of   'ecstasy'. the fact that he had got in a mood of intense appreciation and that everything about him was extremely bright and glamorous might lead the reader to feel that this state of happiness may not last long. the two parts from the excerpt that exemplify the anticipation are: " the sound of the "; " it was a know again."