Dylan wrote the following sentence for his research paper on giraffes. the wide savannah is roamed by tall, graceful giraffes. his teacher told him to revise this sentence so that it is more appropriate for formal writing. explain to dylan how to revise the sentence.

the answer is d: message a character's thoughts

the correct answer is b. in order to explain a point clearly in an essay, it is always better to include a clear example of your ideas. including an scenario in which a family is affected by consumerism will support your argument as well as supporting details, such as quotations from experts and statistics. option a could be correct, but statistics and quotations are supporting ideas rather than clear explanations. choices c and d are simply inadequate. they do not add information about the effects of consumerism, rather they are strategies for engaging the reader

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