Hi people! : ) as my assignment for english class i had to write a poem about anything. (literally) it could either be personal not. whichever would be fine. -don't judge my poem , you.
here you go:
i was sick, i remember the day i caught loneliness. it was the day i lost part of me. i was confused to why. it lay like a stone in my lap. no matter how hard i tried being happy, prying, tearing, it simply would not go away. i remained a pebble, lost in this world so vast and uncaring, cast aside, passed by, left astray. i took steps to destroy it before it zapped me, crushed me, left me victim. i pulled harder, ripping that stone right from my sadden heart and threw it all back into the void from where it
yes, i had thrown loneliness away.

let me know how good or bad this was. was it okay do i need to work on something? (be specific and explain yourself) you! : )

I love writing poems. Your poem was very expressive. I have a few tips that could make it better:

1. Try to organize the poem in stanzas or lines

2. Does it have to rhyme?

3. You don 't necessarily have to have punctuation, especially if you organize it in lines.

4. You also don't have to write in complete sentences. This will make readers imagine what is being said

5. Make up a title for the poem

Your poem is good though. As me if you have any questions.

anyone who was dealing with communism in soviet union in his time had an ideal picture of equality, freedom, the struggle of the working class for a better future, the success of the aristocracy's overthrow and the emancipation of subjugation.   however, anyone who would go to soviet union to see the functioning of the communist system, would be convinced that it was about sad people, about everyday bad life, about the brutal attitude of communist leaders, about ill obsession to completely exterminate every thought on aristocracy. thus, orwell wanted to show all the absurdity, the brutality of the system, the unbearable rule of suspicious morality, the ignorant people who try to play professionally.

the answers are: b. and e.

are there answer choices to this particular question?