Which is the best peer evaluation of the conclusion?
read the paragraph.
1. in conclusion, of all the possible careers in film, the
producer's job is the one that's really cool. 2. among its
many prerequisites, the job of the producer requires
creativity, leadership, and communication skills, along with
superior organizational skills. 3. it'll keep you on your toes,
that's for sure
the details and mechanics are good, but sentences 2
and 3 should be reorganized to include logical
transitions.
the word choice and style are good, but there are
punctuation and organizational errors in sentences 1 and
the mechanics and organization are good, but
sentences 1 and 3 should be edited to achieve a formal
style and objective tone.
the tone and style are good, but errors in grammar,
spelling, and punctuation in sentences 1, 2, and 3 should
be fixed.

The word choice and style are good, but there are

punctuation and organizational errors in sentences 1 and

The mechanics and organization are good, but

sentences 1 and 3 should be edited to achieve a formal

style and objective tone.

Explanation:

in this passage from chapter 6 of "animal farm", by george orwell, what the author is ridiculing in this passage is the frivolity of some rules.

clover, the mare, believes she remembers that the fourth commandment forbade sleeping in beds because it was something that humans did. snowball, napoleon, and the pigs are brain-workers who look after the welfare of the farm. they are the obvious leaders because they are smart, and so they are entitled to eat the best food and sleep in beds. it is squealer, who says these lines making the difference between sleeping with sheets, what humans do, and sleeping in beds, what pigs do. the unwillingness to question authority makes the oppressed to obey without thinking.