Highlight the word or phrase that makes the thesis statement wordy.
i think american schools should replace summer break with more
frequent but shorter vacations throughout the year.

this doesnt make any sense imao

c) problem and solution

lawrence   quinn is the main antagonist of the 2003 live action film adaptation of the cat in the hat. he is the waldens' pompous neighbor whose goal is to marry joan walden for her wealth and get rid of her son conrad by sending him to military school.

quarted means to be housed or "lodged" in someone home

hope this