Can you plz edit my ending make it better plz

as i wander around the destroy kingdom of camelot looking for the sinful jabberwocky. i can see many different kinds of beasts and monsters in the kingdom like the dire wolfs and the green goblins but in front of them are the mythical jabberwocky. i quickly pull out the vorpal sword that my parent gave me then charge at the dire wolfs and the goblins, in one swing i manage to cut through all the dire wolf and the goblin, but then the jabberwocky swing it enormous tail at me that almost kill me but somehow i manage to dodge the strong jabberwocky tail then come the second tail of the jabberwocky swing at me knocking on the ground i got no more energy to stand up, i was powerless against the jabberwocky. as i close my eye thinking to myself “why would anyone trust me to kill the mythical jabberwocky” then a bright light overcome my mind without any hesitation i stand up and grab the vorpal sword. i swiftly jump forward to the jabberwocky as my sword whistles through the air and into the jabberwocky head. the jabberwocky head drop at the ground then i can feel that my body was running through emotion of relief but then i fainted without knowing it.

With this 3 questions ! really need them right! 1. the first continental congress met in philadelphia on september 5, 1774. all of the colonies sent representatives except georgia. this congress continued in session until october 26, 1774. by then it had passed resolutions calling for a boycott against british trade. the author's main purpose was a. to inform b. to persuade c. to instruct d. to give an opinion 2. identify the point of view of each of the following passages. "my second mate was a round-cheeked, silent young man, grave beyond his years, i thought; but as our eyes happened to meet i detected a slight quiver on his lips. i looked down at once. it was not my part to encourage sneering on board my ship. it must be said, too, that i knew very little of my officers." (joseph conrad, "the secret sharer") a. first person b. third person limited c. third person omniscient d. none of the above 3. identify the point of view of each of the following passages. "he had only himself to in his choice: his fortune was his own; for as to frank, it was more than being tacitly brought up as his uncle's heir, it had become so avowed an adoption as to have him assume the name of churchill on coming of age. it was most unlikely, therefore, that he should ever want his father's assistance. his father had no apprehension of it." (jane austen, emma) a. third person omniscient b. third person limited c. first person d. none of the above