Which changes are needed to make jessica's letter more
formal? select three options.
read the acceptance letter jessica has written, and then
answer the question.
445 seagull drive
santa monica, ca 61254
september 19, 2019
change "sooo" to "so"
change "cannot" to "can't"
change "accept with pleasure" to "accept
mr. daniel sabine
123 wheeling road
culver city, ca 61218
dear mr. sabine:
change "just give a holler" to " let me know"
remove at least two of the three exclamation marks
remove "i look forward to meeting you this summer"
i accept with pleasure your offer to be a camp counselor this
summer. i am sooo ! i have many good memories
of being a camper and cannot wait to new campers
create memories of their own.
i have enclosed the forms that you require. just give a holler
if you need anything else. i look forward to meeting you this
summer.
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Match the term to the purpose it has. 1. but 2. furthermore 3. meanwhile 4. in the distance 5. first 6. therefore 7. in other words 8. for instance a. show space relation b. introduce an illustration c. repetition of an idea d. take away, limit, or oppose e. show a consequence f. indicate order g. show time relation h. add ideas

Choose the item which best answers the question. which words are intended most to capture the reader's attention? 1) "students excel" 2)"stimulating multimedia interactive format" 3) "plenty of electives available"

Read the rough draft of a student's conclusion to anargumentative editorial.(1) year-round schooling would student achievement.(2) not so much information would have to be crammed intonine months. (3) furthermore, the elimination of long breaks,particularly summer break, would significantly reduce"learning loss" and the additional time wasted at thebeginning of each academic year to reteach previouslylearned material. (4) it is clear that year-round schooling students learn and retain more. (5) the united staleis not the only country to experiment with a year-roundschool schedule. (6) although many still claim that evidenceabout year-round school and its link to higher achievement isinconclusive, these people need to open their eyes and seethat students in these schools consistently score higher oncertain assessments than students who attend schools withtraditional nine-month calendars. (7) it is about time that wereplaced our outdated and inefficient school calendars.which best revises sentence 6 to create a more appropriate and respectful tone