The more you look at your first paragraph, the more you think you need to reframe it. you’ve redrafted it in the following way: "with a few easy steps, you can prepare to others in the event of an earthquake. in just two hours, find out how you can protect your family members, your colleagues, and your loved ones if a disaster strikes." which principle have you most applied in making these changes?

wheres the following authors?

the reason that neiterkob's daughter most likely tell the beginnings of the maasai is : to explain the readers the origin of maasai culture

with this explanation, the reader will grasp a better concept about it and not lost in the middle of reading.

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they both lost a woman they loved named lenore

they believed they interracted with a talking raven

they became orphaned at a young age.