Answer asap: so, i am writing a compare and contrast essay on least and most favorite subjects and my teacher said "this is a sloppy copy make improvements" but idk what "improvements" to make clearly this teacher is an idiot i tried my best so, i need someone to me look at my essay and rewrite it for me asap ? i will give brain and 50 points

Explanation:

to edit my last response you do have a few grammar errors sorry that i forgot to say that

question 1: d) the old man continued, "in the long run, what people think about shepherds and bakers becomes more important for them than their own destinies.'"

question 2: d) by providing a different perspective and encouraging the englishman to never give up, the boy him to discover the alchemist.

question 3: c) the stones he gave santiago the boy to recognize omens, which will him on his journey to find his personal legend.

question 4: d) when the englishman wants to quit, santiago doesn’t allow the englishman to give up.

question 5: a) by instructing the englishman to go and try, the englishman is motivated to continue on his journey toward his personal legend.

explanation:

if i was falling raindrop:

1. land safely (pretty sure that’s a tough one)

2. wished that time slowed down

3. a beautiful ending