Rewrite the following passage; combine thoughts to produce compound sentences and show logical relationships by
subordinating less important clauses to more important ones. use proper conjunctions, and use verbals or phrases
wherever needed.
the sky was growing gray. the clouds were darkening. the sun was low. it was tinged with red. a biting
wind blew. it was from the north. the tree branches whispered. the birds did not sing. they had gone to
sleep. i was lonely. i thought about a warm walk last spring.

As I walked through the park, the sky began to grow gray. The clouds were darkening and the sun was low and tinged with red. Meanwhile, a biting wind from the north blew, making the branches of the trees whisper. The birds had most likely gone to sleep, and they did not sing. I was lonely, and this led me to think about a warm walk I took last spring.

muir's use of diction creates a mood of urgency and fear. the highlighted words - difficult, difficult, force, crooked, struggling, tangled, fallen, fear, faint and hungry - come together to make you feel that the author is in danger. the imagery is clear so that it comes alive in your mind. diction can create a mood which can bring everything else together.

explanation:

mark brainliest and have a great day!

as for symbolic actions, the narrator's tearing down the wallpaper in an attempt to find the "woman" in the wallpaper represents her struggle to retain or regain her sanity.   the wallpaper has been part of her confinement and by her tearing it down, she is freeing herself from that confinement.