Ineed a transition sentence from my introduction to my body paragraphs

the essay is a letter to george washington, so that’s why we’re using you to talk to the reader

washington,
allow me to be one of many to say that what you did for our country is absolutely priceless. some of the choices you made are still in practice today, though regrettably we’ve strayed further and further from the advice you gave in your farewell address. in present day america, the majority of the population is no longer devoted to the ideals you left us in your resignation, including the importance of unity and avoidance of political parties and alliances.

How can the passage best be revised to eliminate logical fallacies and improve clarity

Which line in this excerpt from the great gatsby by f. scott fitzgerald contains a simile? about half way between west egg and new york the motor-road hastily joins the railroad and runs beside it for a quarter of a mile, so as to shrink away from a certain desolate area of land. this is a valley of ashes—a fantastic farm where ashes grow like wheat into ridges and hills and grotesque gardens where ashes take the forms of houses and chimneys and rising smoke and finally, with a transcendent effort, of men who move dimly and already crumbling through the powdery air. occasionally a line of grey cars crawls along an invisible track, gives out a ghastly creak and comes to rest, and immediately the ash-grey men swarm up with leaden spades and stir up an impenetrable cloud which screens their obscure operations from your sight.

What happens to lovers when there are decreased levels of serotonin in the brain?