Read this stanza from allen ginsberg’s "a supermarket in california."

will we stroll dreaming of the lost america of love past blue automobiles in driveways, home to our silent cottage?

in this stanza, the speaker wishes
he owned a blue vehicle like his neighbors.
he was back in his quiet home away from the market.
whitman was still alive to keep him company.
america could be like it was when whitman was alive.

Read the rough draft of a student's conclusion to anargumentative editorial.(1) year-round schooling would student achievement.(2) not so much information would have to be crammed intonine months. (3) furthermore, the elimination of long breaks,particularly summer break, would significantly reduce"learning loss" and the additional time wasted at thebeginning of each academic year to reteach previouslylearned material. (4) it is clear that year-round schooling students learn and retain more. (5) the united staleis not the only country to experiment with a year-roundschool schedule. (6) although many still claim that evidenceabout year-round school and its link to higher achievement isinconclusive, these people need to open their eyes and seethat students in these schools consistently score higher oncertain assessments than students who attend schools withtraditional nine-month calendars. (7) it is about time that wereplaced our outdated and inefficient school calendars.which best revises sentence 6 to create a more appropriate and respectful tone