What would be a good piece of evidence for a essay of romeo and juliet thesis statement "romeo and juliet develop the central idea of young love being risky because young people miss out on life just to be with someone they love through characters, word choice, and through events

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the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.  

i think she wanted to protect her children from the extreme racism of the american south.