Read the paragraph that deepak wrote to explain how he
used a checklist to revise his paper.
besides the revisions listed in the paragraph, what else can
deepak do to strengthen his paper?
i checked my transitions to make sure they made sense. i
also reread my sentences to determine whether they were
too similar in style and length. i fixed a couple to add
variety. i found one or two words that needed extended
definitions and added them. i made sure that i summarized
all research evidence throughout the paper
he should try to keep all of his sentences the same
length
he should use more than one technique to integrate his
evidence.
he should make sure he has a transition for every
sentence in the paper
he should avoid extended definitions that provide too
much information