Revise the sentence i want to go back to school so i can make big bucks after i graduate

If this sentence were to be used in a formal text such as an essay, it would need two important revisions. First, the spelling of the sentence needs to be changed so that the correct capitalization is used. The second modification that is necessary is using more formal language. Phrases such as "big bucks" are too informal to be used in an essay. A revised sentence would look something like this:

"I want to go back to school so that I can create significant wealth after I graduate."

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)

a line graph will be best to show the income.