Ineed someone to tell me if i marked stresses and pauses correctly in this essay. or if i need to change something. i would really appreciate your

congrats! i have good news for you. you’re one step closer for your perfect ideal job! i’ve been assigned to organize a day care center for the working parents. i’m calling you to offer you a position in this center. i’m aware you have experience working with kids, for this reason, i believed you would be a great candidate for this job. if everything goes as planned, you will be working full time, flexible hours from 8: 00 am to 5: 00 pm monday to friday. you’ll even get a higher paid! than the school you used to work for. this is not the only good thing about this job, you will also have holiday paid vacations, a retirement plan, benefits like medical insurance, and a few more. have you ever been in a hurry, trying to get your lunch ready for work? or have you ever been worried of what to eat, or if you’ll make it on time on your lunch period? well let me tell you, this is another reason why you’ll love this job. every day, you will have free breakfast, and lunch all you can eat. besides all the great things i just mention, this job has. this job, will also you gain more experience in communicating, interacting with different people, and kids, making it easier for you, in case if in the future you decide to apply for jobs that involve working with kids. i really believe this job would be a great fit for you. give it a try! you don’t have anything to loose!

something you need to change is "you'll even get a higher paid! than the school you used to work for" to "you'll even get a higher paid than the school you used to work for". there seems to be a mistake there. also change your mistake to "besides all the great things i just mentioned this job has, this job will also help you gain more experience in communicating,  interacting with different people, and kids making it easier for you, in case if in the future you decide to apply for jobs that involve working with kids"

besides all that, your essay was really good. i would've never came up with this essay or your ideas if I were YOU. it was really good. i think your essay is pretty convincing.

Explanation: it's pretty easy what i did. all i had to do was read the article/essay thoroughly from top to bottom and see if it seems correct and then move on to the mistakes and correct them.

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)