Revising a passage with parallel structu
which revision of the underlined sentences creates a
parallel structure within the paragraph?
abc
because the recorder is familiar, children feel
comfortable playing it.
kelsey is an engineering student at lafayette college in
easton, pennsylvania. for her senior project, she and
her team are designing a robotic device to children
with disabilities play a musical instrument. they selected
the recorder. the recorder has several advantages over
other instruments. the recorder is plastic, making it low
low
cost and durable. the recorder is small, allowing it to be
held easily. another advantage is that many people are
familiar with the recorder. so children feel more
comfortable playing it.
the recorder is familiar, children feel more
comfortable playing it.
people are familiar with the recorder, which creates
comfort for children.
musical instruments need to feel comfortable to
children if we expect them to try to play.
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Read the sentence. the great wave was inexpensive to purchase, costing only about the same as a double of noodles. since lots of copies could be printed and still look good, it made loads of money. which best revises this sentence to create a more formal style and tone? *the great wave was as cheap as buying a double of noodles. since lots of copies could be made and still look great, people started making piles of money. *the great wave was inexpensive to purchase, costing about the same as a double of noodles. since mass quantities could be produced and still look exquisite, it became highly profitable to sell. *the great wave cost next to nothing, practically the same as a double of noodles. since mass quantities could be produced and still look awesome, it became highly profitable to sell. *the great wave was inexpensive to purchase, similar to buying a double of noodles. since lots of copies could be made that still looked amazing, those who sold it made tons of money.