Can someone with grammar and make it sound professional !

I, personally, thought they would look more like Johnny Depp, but instead they looked more like Sid, from Ice Age. Then, the leader of the group tried to communicate with me, but I only understood English.

Hope this helps. Just as a suggestion, try to separate your sentences when they change topic so they don’t turn into run-ons.

he is. some of his decisions were very irresponsible and did lead to the death of both romeo and juliet, such as him marrying them too quick or him not clarifying romeo's plan with him.

basically he did not think things through well enough or at all.

hope this