Review the module writing prompt.
how have these two authors expressed their relationships with nature? after reading and analyzing "calypso borealis," an essay by john muir, and william wordsworth's poem "i wandered lonely as a cloud," write an essay in which you describe how each author views nature and answer the question. support your discussion with evidence from the text.
using what you learned in the lesson, write your thesis statement in response to the writing prompt.

I think if you just opened your introduction with a "hook" or a sentence that captures the readers attention would be better. I better "hook" sentence i can give is: Two literary works best conveyed nature in their own manner, one called "The Calypso Borealis," an essay written by John Miller called and a poem written by William Wordsworth's called "I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud." --

From there, post this-The authors of Calypso Borealis and “I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud,” not only through the diction , vocabulary, and syntax, but also through the impact of tone, and mood, and while both authors express their relationship in different ways there is still the essence of them impact on the audience. and fix the the sentence avoiding run-ons that's the best i can give.

the characters are fiction but they are based off of people that were reaky in that situation