Sample response: to edit the paragraph, the writer should put a comma between hot and dry because they are coordinate adjectives. the word august should be capitalized, but summer and north should not. finally, the writer should use a serial comma in the list and set off which i love with a pair of commas to avoid confusing readers. review the sample response. which changes did you suggest in your response? check all that apply. the coordinate adjectives hot and dry should be separated by a comma. august should be capitalized. summer and north should not be capitalized. there should be a serial comma in the list. a pair of commas should separate the phrase which i love from the rest of the sentence.