2. revise the following paragraph from a student essay. focus on making the main claim ciester,
strengthening the evidence, and addressing problems with plagiarism. you may choose to use portions
of the paragraph as they are written underline any phases or sentences that you copy from the original
paragraph. then use bold font to highlight any sentences you atted to the paragraph (15 points)

answer: i do love you and won’t stop, but i can’t just take you back when you know we’re not supposed to be dating. even tho i can care less but i’m not going anywhere i promise that❤️

explanation:

that his long years of service outweigh any faults he may have had.

he wanted to be remembered for the good things he did, one of those being when he gave up office so others would follow suit, but george washington wasn’t a man who thought he was perfect, he knew he made mistakes. he was a very talented soldier with a natural gift of tactic.

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