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she played video games all day long without stopping.
a) immature writing
without ceasing, she gripped her controller in her hands and dominated her video games all day long.
b) overuse of thesaurus
for what had the quality of time interminable, she toiled merrily at her digital amusement.
c) mature writing
-worst summer ever > ; (
-sunshine ^_^

Explanation:

She played video games all day long without stopping.

A) Immature Writing

While this is a complete sentence, this is generally only accepted in casual sentences, and is not used for formal writings.

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For what had the quality of time interminable, she toiled merrily at her digital amusement.

B) Overuse of Thesaurus

This sentence uses the Thesaurus too much, for many of the words used are not "every-day" words, and is most likely a "bigger" word found in the Thesaurus (which provides the synonyms).

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Without ceasing, she gripped her controller in her hands and dominated her video games all day long.

C) Mature Writing

While this is not a casual writing, it also doesn't overuse any "high-class" words that very few know. This is the right sentence to use in many stories or essays.

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She played video games all day long without stopping.

A) Immature Writing

Without ceasing, she gripped her controller in her hands and dominated her video games all day long.

C) Mature Writing

For what had the quality of time interminable, she toiled merrily at her digital amusement.

B) Overuse of Thesaurus

i would pick a. i think this is more of a personal question though.